English 250
Matt Beth
For
as long as we all can remember, there has been a constant juxtaposition between
the proper rehabilitation techniques of heat vs. ice. Lenny Bernstein, a
journalist for the Washington Post, attempted to tackle this issue in his article
“Ice, heat or a little of both? How do
you recover from a hard workout?” Within his piece he interviewed two local
professionals to compare and contrast their views on recovery practices,
letting the reader formulate their own opinion on what practices are best based
on the juxtaposed views.
Bernstein begins his piece as any
writer does, with a brief intro covering the background of the topic and the
methods through which he will address the issue. He explains how the classical
form of rehabilitation has always been icing the post workout areas, though the
science backing this method may be flawed. He then introduces the two individuals
that he interviewed: Robert Gillanders, a physical therapist and spokesperson
for the American Physical Therapy Association, as well as Steve Hays, an
impressive marathoner and a high school track and cross country coach.
Bernstein then moves to the actual
body of his article, comparing and contrasting the two view points trough a
series of 3 questions. The first is “Your athlete or client has just completed
his hardest workout of the week. What is your advice about recovering quickly
and effectively?” Gillanders ultimately responds saying that if he had to
choose, heat would be the best option, claiming that it allows for hydrostatic
pressure and certain stretching needed for recovery, whereas the cold just
postpones the healing.
Hays however
suggest a combination of heat and ice, alternating on 10-minute cycles. He
explains that he uses this method in an attempt to gain the benefits from both
methods. The following two questions just divulge deeper into how the men
interviewed came to use their respective methods and if they have any
exceptions for methods.
Ultimately, I think Bernstein
successfully and objectively gave the reader a good idea of the variation in
methods and the reasons, athletic professionals have for their methods. One of
the major ways that he accomplished this was by the format and organization in
which he represented the information. In his article, he wrote each main
question that he asked in bold and then had each person’s respective responses
directly following it. Prior to writing out each of the interviewee’s
responses, he listed their name in bold. This made the article very reader
friendly and made a clear separation in the different points of view. In
articles with medical content, it is very easy to quickly lose the reader and
bore them. I mean lets face it, anatomy and therapy isn’t the most exciting
thing ever (unless you are a complete nerd like yours truly). Bernstein does a
fantastic job at keeping his piece simplistic and easy to follow through the
structure that he used.
While I did think that Bernstein did
a great job of giving a general and objective view of the issue of heat versus
ice, I did draw an issue with his article, which was the credentials of the
people he interviewed. As I stated earlier, Gillanders is a certified physical
therapist and a spokesperson for the American Physical Therapy Association,
whereas Hays is simply a High school coach and a marathon runner. I think this
discrepancy in credentials discredits Hays’ information a lot and ultimately diminishes
the argument that he makes. Were Bernstein to interview someone with a higher
level of credibility, I think his piece on the variance of therapy methods
would have been stronger and would have given the reader more information to
consider.
I really enjoyed reading Lenny Bernstein’s
article “Ice, heat or a little of both? How do you recover from a hard workout?”
and thought it was a very important and well-written piece. It was perfect; in
it’s simplistic nature, for the average reader and those who may not have a lot
of background information on the controversy. With his intended audience in
mind, I think Bernstein did an excellent job but for anyone digging deeper into
the information, I think his sources could have been stronger. Either way,
Bernstein successfully completed his goal of delivering a general outlook on
the ongoing debate of heat versus ice for the readers of his articles.
http://www.washingtonpost.com/lifestyle/wellness/ice-heat-or-a-little-of-both-how-do-you-recover-from-a-hard-workout/2013/04/16/59ea8116-a388-11e2-9c03-6952ff305f35_story.html
http://www.washingtonpost.com/lifestyle/wellness/ice-heat-or-a-little-of-both-how-do-you-recover-from-a-hard-workout/2013/04/16/59ea8116-a388-11e2-9c03-6952ff305f35_story.html
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